From the Help Desk of Beverley Bittner.
Most of us have read a poem, a story or an article that caused us to exclaim, “I could write like that, maybe even better, if only I knew how to get started.
Kathy has a book of fiction in the works. She has a plot, she knows her characters, but (in my opinion) is trying to tell too much of the story in her first chapter. Here are a few suggestions that might help Kathy and you and I get started right.
The first chapter has only two basic purposes.
- To introduce the main character (or two of the main characters). That means a physical description, hint at the problem he/she faces that will be the basis of conflict in the book. When and where the story is taking place can be shown by a few words. “Action”, “show”, “don’t tell” are words to keep you on track. (Introducing characters, one by one, each in a separate chapter is a good way to get your novel moving along.)
- You must HOOK the reader in your first paragraphs and certainly in the first chapter. Don’t overload the reader with background and facts that can be brought out later. By promising lots of action, dialogue, backstory in small doses, you can make the reader WANT to read your book. If you don’t hook him in the first pages, you have lost your reader.
The first scene of the first chapter must tell:
WHO is the story about?
WHERE and WHEN is the story taking place?
WHY is the main character there?
WHAT problems is the character facing?
This may seem like a lot of information to get in the first scene, but remember you don’t want to give away your story or tell too much. Be a tease, hint at events to come.
Now that all-important first sentence
It should tell something about the main character. It should tell something about or hint at the character’s problem, and the theme of the book. Is it a mystery? Love story? Inspirational? Is a historical event itself the focus of the story?
If you have a work in progress, look at it and see if your opening sentence, scene and first chapter measure up to these guidelines. If it is a first, second, or third draft, probably not. Only by rereading, rewriting, and finally working as your own editor, will your first chapter pass the eagle eye of an admissions editor.
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That’s all from the Editor’s Desk for this month…
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Beverley Bittner (1930–2006) was born in Dunkirk, NY, a daughter of Paul and Doris Blakeslee. She was raised and educated in Spartansburg, Pennsylvania where she graduated from Spartansburg High School in 1948. She moved to Corry, Pennsylvania in 1960, and resided there until 1979 when she moved to Cleveland, Ohio, for several years. She was the Associate Editor for the Union Gospel Press in Cleveland, and was a free-lance writer for various religious publications. She had a special interest in history, wrote about veterans of World War II, and wrote and published a series of five novels about the history of western Pennsylvania and the origins of the local oil industry. She founded the Writer’s Block in 1999 after moving back to Corry and served as a mentor to other writers until her death in 2006.